Medical and Travel Copywriting
Bruna Costa – Copywriting
Section 1
New Yorkers – Come over to the Pocono Mountains this summer!
If you’re in the Big Apple, you’re probably used to fast-paced movement. There’s a lot of hustle and bustle in New York. There’s a lot to see, and the noise pollution is no joke! Sure, the city life is beautiful; it’s unique, artsy, full of nightlife, shopping, and more people than you can imagine. While there’s plenty to offer in Manhattan, you can’t help but forget the importance of getting out of the city to experience something more untapped: good old nature. Besides, New York’s summer heat can be overwhelming, especially in the subway system. You’ll want to take a break and visit the Pocono Mountains! The Pocono Mountains will satisfy your soul with beautiful mountain peaks and breathtaking views. The Pocono Mountains are a perfect escape from the city. Located only 100 miles from New York City, the Poconos offer scenic routes, hikes, and antique shops. It will be your new home away from home. You’ll feel the difference and finally feel peace with no noise pollution! You’ll also be able to see and experience the magic of Stars. For a quiet and nature-filled getaway, come over to the Poconos, and you’ll be glad you did.
Plan your stay before you come over to the Pocono Mountains!
About 2,400 square miles comprise Pennsylvania’s counties (Wayne, Pike, Monroe, and Carbon). There is so much to do that you’ll want to be sure and plan before you come. You can go canoeing, kayaking, hiking, or biking. You’ll be able to try your luck fishing. You’ll also be able to enjoy many of the historic museums that the area provides. You can check out an outdoor water park like Camel Beach or even play in an indoor waterpark (Kalahari). You can see eagles by the Delaware River if you're interested in birdwatching. There are tons of nature spots and Waterfalls in the Poconos. You won’t be bored- we promise!
What are the benefits of Rhinoplasty?
As you might expect, Rhinoplasty (nose surgery) has many benefits. The first benefit comes in the form of a person’s improved self-esteem. While a nose job is designed to help modify the shape and size of the nose, functional changes also occur. Your surgeon can increase or decrease the size of the nose. He or she can alter the shape of the nostrils, remove a bump, or make the nose straighter. Nose jobs are the third most popular plastic surgery procedure in the U.S., for good reason. Primarily, there are looks. Let’s face it: we all want to look our best. Confidence is key, and if you don’t feel confident about the way your nose looks, getting a nose job can help. While getting surgery can be a little scary, it’s important to note that the benefits you’ll be able to reap should outweigh any fears you have.
Health Benefits Beyond Self-Confidence
Getting a nose job can become crucial to a person’s improved self-confidence. Improvements to a person’s confidence can change your life. There are, of course, plenty of other benefits to rhinoplasty, including health benefits. A nose job can aid in breathing problems, especially for those who have suffered from breathing problems. If a structural change can be made, it might be in your best interest to see if it is. Improved breathing means better quality sleep and wake time. A nose job can also aid in helping with sinus problems. Headaches and even nasal congestion can be improved with rhinoplasty. Other benefits of Rhinoplasty include repairing a broken nose and improving birth defects. Your surgeon will be trained in creating balance and symmetry during the procedure.
Sources:
https://www.mangatplasticsurgery.com/blog/7-benefits-rhinoplasty-surgery/
https://www.garzaplasticsurgery.com/blog/health-benefits-of-rhinoplasty
Section II – Social Media Copy
Where to stay in the Poconos
FB: With the Holidays around the corner, plan your visit to the Poconos ahead of time! Stay at the Beautiful Mountaintop Lodge at Lake Naomi. Check out Mountaintop Lodge at Lake Naomi for updated prices on stays.
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Twitter: The Pocono Mountains are a great honeymoon spot! Romance will be found among the breathtaking views and the Mountaintop Lodge at Lake Naomi. Don’t wait to book your unforgettable memory!
Instagram: If you want to immerse yourself in the historic beauty of the Poconos, stay at the Victorian Manor by Broadhead Creek. It’s the perfect place for a fall getaway! You can cozy up with a cup of tea and read some Victorian literature!
- Where to hike this summer in the Poconos
FB: If you’re in the Poconos in the summer and want to find the best hiking spot, try Tobyhanna State Park. It’s local, clean, and there’s even a beach! Make sure to hike the 5.1-mile loop around. It will be a nice, hour-long walk for you and your friends.
Twitter: Known as the Niagara of Pennsylvania, Bushkill Falls is a famous attraction for hikers. Who wouldn’t want to go hiking here? Waterfalls await you! Bushkill Falls is open daily from April through October/November - weather permitting.
Instagram: The Poconos are known for Waterfalls. If you’re up for fun, including gorgeous waterfalls and rich scenery, try the Delaware Water Gap. The Delaware Water Gap is steeped with rich history and striking scenery along 40 miles of the longest free-flowing river east of the Mississippi.
- Indoor water parks of the Poconos
FB: Believe it or not, the Poconos is a waterpark haven. You don’t need to travel far or go to the hottest place to enjoy waterparks. Not when you get to Kalahari, a heated waterpark and wild adventure all in one. Kalahari is great for kids as well as adults. You don’t want to miss out!
Twitter: Whether you’re a family person or a lone wolf, the Great Wolf Lodge theme and resort park is the place to be! Escape the ordinary and get out with your pack! Plan a visit today!
Instagram: Want to have fun? Come to Aquatopia. Aquatopia is 125,000 square feet of pure fun! Come by Camel Beach Mountain outdoor Waterpark located in Monroe County. You won’t be disappointed by the new adventure here.
Section III – Social Media Hashtags
Please research and add a list of relevant Instagram #hashtags for each of the following post topics to help increase exposure and attract new followers (8-10 hashtags per post).
- Summer fun with the family at a water park
#waterpark #fun #summerfun #familyday #familyvacation #Poconos #Poconotourism #hot #Pennsylvania #blueskies #funmemories #resort #waterslides
- Couples ski/snowboarding trip
#snowboarding #couplesskiing #snow #poconotourism #funinthesnow #romantictrip #valentinesday #weekendgetaway #lovemyfiance #couples #hotchocolate
Section IV – Social Media Responses
The following examples represent H2OBX Waterpark, located in North Carolina. You are responding to social media users interacting with your posts. Please write responses to the following social media comments. Below is a link to the official website.
https://www.h2obxwaterpark.com/
Section IV – Social Media Responses
For the following examples, you represent H2OBX Waterpark in North Carolina. You are responding to social media users interacting with your posts. Please write responses to the following social media comments. Below is a link to the official website.
https//www.h2obxwaterpark.com/
- Can’t wait! I will be there next month!
We can’t wait to see you either! Don’t hesitate to reach out to us with any questions.
- We need to take the boys soon, @John Smith!
Your boys will be sure to love it here! You and @John Smith will be glad you took the plunge! Contact us with any questions.
- I am looking forward to Memorial Day. What time do you open?
Great Question! Our 2023 operating schedule will be posted in Spring 2023. Please check out our website or Facebook page for options.
- Do you offer group rates? I'm trying to bring my company for the day!!
We offer group rates and hope you and your company can join us. H20BX group tickets will be on sale in spring 2023.
- I need info about dining options, please…
Of course! Happy to help! You’ll find plenty of family-friendly options at H20BX, whether traditional North Carolina BBQ or a grab-and-go option. You’ll also be happy with our beer and wine options. Oh, and don’t forget dessert; you can’t beat it.
Section V – Copyediting
· Please proofread and edit the below sections:
Presenting Dr. Asaadi’s “Botox Test” for Diagnosis of Malar Bags!
Diagnosing malar bags and festoons can be extremely difficult. These conditions, also known as severe undereye bags, are persistent and problematic. They can prevent you from feeling good about your appearance if left untreated. They can also prevent you from expressing your true emotions. Luckily, Dr. Asaadi has developed a system for testing the source of these troublesome face issues using Botox injections.
The Botox Test
Dr. Asaadi's Botox test is designed to diagnose the causes underlying malar bags and festoons. Since these conditions might have multiple causes, it is crucial to know what’s creating them. Diagnosing the cause is critical to formulating a proper treatment plan. By injecting Botox into the muscle around the eyes (known as the orbicularis oculi), Dr. Asadi can indicate whether your condition is caused by excess fat or a loss of tightness and muscle tone. If your festoons or malar bags worsen after the Botox injection, this will indicate to the doctor that aging in your muscle has led to laxity around the eyes and upper cheeks. If, however, the Botox injection doesn't alter the appearance of the festoons, then your condition is caused by localized fat. Upon diagnosing the underlying cause of your issue, Dr. Assadi can formulate a treatment plan.
Options to Treat Double Chin!
Laser treatments to Tighten Tissues
Laser skin tightening can firm or tighten loose neck skin, contributing to a double chin. This non-invasive procedure uses light pulses to heat the deeper layers of your skin. The laser's heat results in the contraction of your body’s Collagen fibers to produce a long-lasting firming effect while stimulating new collagen production. The laser is applied above the neck and simultaneously cools the skin’s surface during treatment to minimize patient discomfort.
Lift Sagging Skin With liposuction.
Laser liposuction is a minimally invasive laser skin tightening treatment that can remove tiny fat deposits around the chin to improve contours and produce optimal skin-firming results. Laser liposuction treatment utilizes heat energy to target tissues in the deep dermis; it promotes skin tightening and the production of new collagen. Rather than treating the loose neck skin above the surface, the laser is inserted beneath the skin through a tiny incision. Once in place, the laser delivers heat to the target area, destroying fat cells and producing long-lasting skin-tightening results. Patients are given a local anesthetic to reduce discomfort during their liposuction procedure.
Submental Liposuction to Remove Excess Fat Cells
Submental liposuction can shape the neck by removing small pockets of fat underneath the chin to promote smooth contours around the jawline. Cannulas are inserted through small incisions around the area of your double chin to suction excess fat cells from your body gently. Removing these submental fat cells through liposuction can improve chin definition and reduce the appearance of a double chin. Local anesthetic is administered during the submental liposuction procedure to minimize discomfort.
Resort Amenities:
Arcade
Let the kids explore our arcade, which features hundreds of captivating games and prizes to win!
Dining
Satisfy your inner Iron Chef. Fine dining is a must at our premier resort. Our restaurants offer diverse dishes and delectable selections for even the biggest food lovers! You might want to bring a bigger belt
SPA
Spend your vacation in a state of relaxation! Pamper yourself with one of our signature spa packages. Our packages feature Massages, herbal treatments, nail care, skin care – you name it, we have it.
Casino
Adults need playtime, too! Choose from table games and slot machines to win BIG during your stay.
